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Ino?
May 23, 2009 15:59:42 GMT -5
Post by ino on May 23, 2009 15:59:42 GMT -5
Hmm, bored so why not. Plus i have enough posts to critique. and I really need to lengthen my posts  .. so have a stab. |
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Ino?
May 23, 2009 16:03:18 GMT -5
Post by Shikamaru Nara on May 23, 2009 16:03:18 GMT -5
hmm , i think you make a great , ino , you certinly got the yelling at shika thing down. which makes me laugh. And your post always look nice and neat.
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Haruno Sakura
Konohagakure [admin]
Cherry Blossom Maiden
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Ino?
May 23, 2009 16:05:37 GMT -5
Post by Haruno Sakura on May 23, 2009 16:05:37 GMT -5
I have to agree on that, you get Ino's personality down pretty good. Yes, your posts should be longer [I'd suggest striving for like, a 300 word minimum or something] but you get her down pretty well. If you want a tip, just delve into her thoughts a little more without actually making it... her thoughts, you know? Kinda like my posts. ^_^ I really go into the thoughts of the character and delve into other situations, and that's what makes 'em so much. xD
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Ino?
May 23, 2009 16:20:12 GMT -5
Post by ino on May 23, 2009 16:20:12 GMT -5
Thanks guys, i didnt think i was really that good at her personality, but thats a real boost, cheers. And i will get the posts longer, I tend to get lazy when it comes to posting.
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