Help Meh?~

[Kogitsune]

What do you guys think could be improved about Kogitsune's posts? o_<; I realize that there's an inconsistency with his physical condition (such as how he can become aroused without breaking down, but when he sees Kumataka for the second time, the first thing he does after he registers who it is, he has an attack), but I don't really know how to explain that. xD; I'll find some way, though. I think it's 'cause he forgot to take his meds when he woke up that morning~

(Yes... in his app, it says that he has meds, but I forgot about them when typing that post, which could possibly explain it? ^^

Other than that factor, is there anything you guys could help me with on him? I feel like he has so much more potential, but I just can't seem to find those points that would bring them out~

[Haruno Sakura]

I dunno... Hmm...

Your posts are usually really good, but maybe give him a little more oomph, if you know what I mean. Like, from what I can tell, most of the threads he's in aren't really anything action-epic. Perhaps putting him into a battle-esque position would be interesting?

I fail at critiquing. xDDD But usually your posts are pretty good most of the time! ^_^

[Kogitsune]

xD I would put him in battle, but the closest he's gotten to it is when Kaji shows up to hit on him~ I'd love to fight with him, but he's just to lax of a guy to actually train (I think if he does that, he'd end up hurting himself more)... I think he would have attacked Kaji for hurting Kuma if Kuma hadn't dragged them away. ^-^;