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Post by Shikamaru Nara on May 23, 2009 16:13:46 GMT -5
alright here goes nothing. let me know how im doing playing shika ,seeing its my first time.
and before you say it , yah i know i suck at grammer and spelling. but hey i try my best.
plz dont be to harsh lol
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Post by ino on May 23, 2009 16:17:17 GMT -5
I think you make a great Shikamaru, you're lazy, you sigh alot and you get on Ino's nerves so Kudos! Have you tried using spellcheck? I know some of the words get mixed like.. Shikamaru= shimmery. But eh, get most of them to a T. Thats All i gotta say Well done  |
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Tenten
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Post by Tenten on May 23, 2009 18:27:41 GMT -5
Yeah, you seem to be doing Shikamaru some grace with the whole laziness, without-a-care sort of personality, and it'll be interesting to see you put him into a position of strategy. It'll mean a lot of thinking ahead for you, and working with whatever gets thrown at you in regards to battle situations. It'll be interesting to see!
Your grammar and spelling isn't always the best at times, though, so you'll have to watch that. You do try, though, and most of the time it's understandable. So long as we can understand it and you're trying to do what you can, then you're good. A suggestion is to make your posts a lot less choppy, though; your sentences tend to be such, and making them less choppy would be awesome.
-Harshly uberstabs- xDDD Kidding, kidding. You *do* do an awesome job, though.
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