Kiba Inuzuka
Konohagakure
Konoha's Spinning Fang
Inuzuka Kiba and Akamaru
Posts: 214
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Kiba
May 25, 2009 4:34:55 GMT -5
Post by Kiba Inuzuka on May 25, 2009 4:34:55 GMT -5
Well, I'll join the trend, I'm curious to see if there are any changes that I need to make as Kiba...I play him on a number of sites and I'm wondering if I hit the nail on the head or if I'm way off....plus any suggestions...you know what to do!!
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Haruno Sakura
Konohagakure [admin]
Cherry Blossom Maiden
This time, everyone, get a good look at my back.
Posts: 482
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Kiba
May 25, 2009 8:14:14 GMT -5
Post by Haruno Sakura on May 25, 2009 8:14:14 GMT -5
I'd say you're pretty close, if you happen to be off at all. Kiba's cocky, he's a bit headstrong at times, but the one thing I think you really need to work on is striving yourself to long posts with every single one. It's nicer to read longer posts [IMO] because usually they're much better written than other ones, and you get to see a lot more of the character. I'd say, try to strive for at least 200 words each post ^^; and more if possible. The longer, the better!
You seem to have his personality down pretty well, though.
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