Katsuro Zumi [DONE]

[Katsuro Zumi]

: Character Information |::

Katsuro Zumi

Type:Original
Age: 13
Gender:Male
Sexuality:Bisexual
Status:Single
Interest:None
Face Claim:Miyabi Kashihara ( I do not know what show he is from he from the anime character database}


Appearance:

Katsuro does not let his short height get the better of him. Seeing his only stands about five foot one. He weighs less than his sister who waited one hundred and twenty. He weighs only one hundred pounds and does not seem to gain a pound. His hair is a sandy blond color like his real and fake mom. His eyes are blue like his father and fake father.

Clothes:
Katsuro usually wears a short sleeved yellow t-shirt that has a big collar. On the front starting from the neck and going down the shirt bottom it has a red cross. His shorts are baggy and tan and have many pockets were he keeps lots of junk. The blue ninja headband that was given to him is tied around his neck. While his ninja pouch his attached to his leg. His sandals are black instead of blue.

Personality:

Outgoing:
Katsuro is a very kind and sweet big hearted guy. He always seems to be in a good mood no matter the occasion. If the mood is dim he likes to try and cheer everyone up. So much that he could be a motivational speaker is he wished to do so. But he wanted to be power ninja and thats all that matters. Katsuro has alot of confidence in himself and tries to teach his friends to do the same. Because he belevies that being scared will not help you get better.

Hyper:
Katsuro can also be kind of annoying sometimes. Due to the fact that he is happy and hyper most of the time. He cannot seem to still for more that ten seconds. So usually after ten seconds he will start complaining. Before doing something that will entertain him like jumping around. He loves to jump around no matter how many times he is told to stop. Katsuro also sometimes goes on these hyper talkative rants. Were he goes on and on about one subject until he is told to shut up.

Klutz:
Katsuro gets to ahead of himself alot of them time. So he usually ends up falling on his but alot with out meaning to. He is one the those people who fall on their own two feet when they run to fast. But afterward he usually brushes it off with a laugh and says sorry I'm a klutz excuse me. No matter how many times he falls he also seems to get back up. Even if it takes him a while to get back up. He vows never to give up no matter what because he needs to find his sister.

Sister:
Katsuro never really thought much of his sister all that much. Untill their real parents gave them up and they became close. Even though they were close Katsuro was still kind of absent minded in remembering she was kindnapped. Beacause he was to young to understand and thought she was on a mission. It was not untill he was older that he noticed how much his parents were hurting. So he vowed to save his sister for thier sake and his. Hoping he would find her alive and not dead.

History:

Katsuro was born on a bright sunny day in the leaf village. It was the tenth of july and the whole family was there for the birth. Besides his mother and father his grandmother and grandfather and older sister were there. Katsuro's sister Ami was adopted because his parents were having trouble getting pregnant. So it was a surprise when Mrs. Zumi got pregnant with Katsuro.

When Katsuro was one years old and his sister was two. His parents put them up for adoption because they wanted to explore the world. The real reaosn was thatv they had no meont becuase they were in debt. The exploreing the world thing was just to cover thier but. They left them with first family they found in the paper that was looking for kids their age. The young couple had the same hair color as Katsuro and the same eye color as Ami. They checked the faimly out and stayed a week at there house before signing the adpotion papers. And leaving the contry becuase of there debt.

On Katsuro's fifth birthday his sister started to act strange.

When he was six he finally started going to the ninja academy. His sister was still acting odd that year. Katsuro still thought his parents were being funny and went about his studies. Katsuro graduted at 13 with the normal grades and was assign to team five. He told his parents as soon as he was told about it. Also that year his sister went missing.

But still their minds were only on his sister. That still had not been found yet by the ANBU black ops. This depressed Katsuro so he vowed to his parents that he would become a powerful ninja. So that one day he could go out and find sister were ever she was. No matter what kind of ninja had taken her.

So he trained hard everyday with and without his team. Doing train excerises that he made up himself. He also challenge other genin to sparing matches. He lost most of them so he gave up on that untill he was stronger.Most the first missions his team and him got were d rank missions. Katsuro hated d ranked missions he felt that they taught him nothing.

Chakra Element: Katon/Fire

Rank: Genin

Affiliation: Leaf

Weapons:
~Kunai
~Shuirken
~Paper bombs
~Smoke bombs

Known Jutsu:

~ Body Replacement Technique[Kawarimi no Jutsu] :: It's implied in the name. The user switches his or her body with a plant, animal or anything for that matter. This is used to escape dangerous situations such as many sharp projectiles being flung at the person. Sometimes you can damage your opponent with this attack even.

~ Transformation skill[Henge no jutsu] :: A basic shinobi skill. Transforms the user into another different appearance. Whether they transform into another person or turn into a material thing such as a shuriken, doesn't matter.

~Nawanuke no Jutsu} Escaping Skill
~Kinobori no Waza} Act of Tree Climbing
~Suimen Hokou no Waza} Act of surface walking
~Release[Kai]} genjutsu release

~ Mythical Fire Flower[Katon Housenka ] :: A jutsu that sends multiple blasts of fire from the mouth, usually with one target in mind. Shurikens can also be hidden inside the flames, creating an element of surprise

Theme Songs(s): Optional, but they're fun to do. Max 7 songs.
Extra Notes: this character is being made for aya , for squad 5

: Puppeteer Information |::

Your Name: Kenji/zuzu
Your Age: 18
Read The Manga / Seen The Anime? yeah
How'd you find me?! I play Shikamaru Nara and Itachi Uchiha and Izuru Kiro on here
Rule Code: flirtatious fujiwara

Sample RP:

It was the late afternoon and a slight wind was running threw the trees. The forest was quiet expect for the wind's whistle. Along with the occasional bird cheerping in the tree tops. There seemed to be no one else around Expect one young eighteen year old blond boy. That was sitting under one of the larger trees. He seemed to be upset about something.

Because he had his knees bent to his chest and his chin was rested on them. While he started out into to space like he was in some sort of trance. His name was Izuru kiro he was a freaked out chunnin. This boy seemed to be also freaked or nervous in some way.

Izuru made a face to himself and closed his eyes tightly. Before opening them again then closeing them once more. Izuru made another face to himself and open his eyes again. Before letting out a lonley sigh of dispair.

[Mitarashi Anko]

`Appearance: You switched from third person to first person. The rest of the profile is spoken in third person. This needs to be fixed, mainly because you really shouldn't combine these two, plus first person annoys me to no end. <.<.
`Personality: How does he feel about his sister missing? That somewhat something that can define him.
`Jutsu: You need the code in the first two jutsu. Grand Fireball Jutsu, is extremely powerful even for Sasuke use when he was that age and it took him months to learn. Unless you explain in your history about how he learned this, you will have to remove it.

`There are a few grammar errors. Just skim through it and fix these, and once again you are going to hear me say this: DO NOT PLACE A SPACE BETWEEN THE LAST LETTER OF A WORD AND A COMA. I only see few of these, which is better than your last profile. Mrs.Zumi it needs to be Mrs. Zumi. A space between the . and the Z.

[Katsuro Zumi]

Is it alright now ?

[Mitarashi Anko]

Besides this: Shikamaru Nara , Itachi Uchiha , Izuru Kiro should be Shikamaru Nara, Itachi Uchiha, Izuru Kiro. Look no space between the comas XD.

Also you weight spelled wrong in the appearance.

And you see need to place the [/i*] tag in the rest of the jutsu, along with the blockquote tag.

[Katsuro Zumi]

ok fixed

[Hyuuga Neji]

Other than the spelling of weight in the appearance, you have it has waiting......

[Hyuuga Hanabi]

All right. My only qualms lie within the history, so I'm going to work through it with comments and such in pink.

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Katsuro was born on a bright sunny day in the leaf village. It was the tenth of july and the whole family was there for the birth. Besides his mother and father his grandmother and grandfather and older sister were there. Katsuro'sNo space in there before the apostrophe, remember that. sister Ami was adopted because his parents were having trouble getting pregnant. So it was a surprise when Mrs. Zumi got pregnant with Katsuro.

When Katsuro was one years old and his sister was two. His parents put them up for adoption because they wanted to explore the world.That makes no sense whatsoever. That's not even a really valid reason for them to be adopted.. And at one year old, and two for his sister? Most children are adopted when they're born, unless they've been orphaned at a young age. You'll need a much better reason than the fact that 'they wanted to explore the world' in order to put them up for adoption. They left them with first family they found in the paper that was looking for kids their age.Um, they would check out the family first, you know... Wanna have a good rep and all. The young couple had the same hair color as Katsuro and the same eye color as Ami. So they told Katsuro and his sister that they were their real parents. Katsuro and Ami would know that the two weren't their real parents, because little kids aren't that stupid, trust me. At that age, they would be tied to their parents, because they would have spent so much time with them. It would be a gut feeling to know that those people were not their parents.

On Katsuro's fifth birthday his sister got kidnapped by a rogue ninja. His adopted parents kept it from him the whole day to aviod upsetting him on his birthday. But they told him the next day at one in the afternoon. The news had no effect on the little boy it was all a big pot of confusion to him.

When he was eight? Most people start at age five, you know. If he's graduating at 13, he'd start at six, not eight. he finally started going to the ninja academy. His sister was still missing that year. Katsuro still thought his parents were being funny and went about his studies.Um, he would notice if his sister wasn't coming back. You're making him look like the biggest idiot in history. HE WOULD NOTICE IF HIS SISTER WAS MISSING. Um, she would've been missing for what, three years by that point? I think not. You'll have to change that around a lot. Unless you really want him to seem like a dumbass <_< Katsuro graduted at 13 with the normal grades and was assign to team five. He told his parents as soon as he was told about it.

But still their minds were only on his sister. That still had not been found yet by the ANBU black ops. This depressed Katsuro so he vowed to his parents that he would become a powerful ninja. So that one day he could go out and find sister were ever she was. No matter what kind of ninja had taken her. I could possibly have a plot for this guy, and it would involve Aiuya. You may have to move the kidnapping to later in his life, though, because Aiuya left Konoha only a few years in the past. I believe when she was 23 or something... and she's 25 now. If you could do that, I could totally have a plot ^_^ Your choice, though.

Also, I'd like to see some major expansion on his history. Even for a Genin, it's really short... You can get more out of thirteen years of his life. ><

[Katsuro Zumi]

Fixed?